Thursday, November 04, 2004

Day Two - 50 Word Extract

The ending paragraph of Chapter One:

"Sweat, apples and sex mingled in the air as he collapsed on her - smooth, soft and perfect beneath him – and yet not. A torrent of emotions twisted into a single stream of loneliness that threatened to wash his true self away. Bile stung his throat before exhaustion claimed him. A final thought, an echo of Kyamis's desparate words whispered through his mind. 'I know what you are.'"

0 Comments:

Post a Comment

<< Home