Tuesday, November 09, 2004

Day Nine - Extract from Chapter Eleven

"When the flash faded he was greeted by a moderately lit workroom. An alarm blinked as he stumbled from the portpad and a nearby worker called out in a mix of annoyance and astonishment. ‘Hey. How did you port in here? This is a restricted area.’

He was too tired to augment and the smears of blood that trailed behind him prevented a bluff of authority. ‘I’ll be going then,’ he replied.

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At 9 November 2004 at 8:27 pm, Anonymous Anonymous said...

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At 9 November 2004 at 8:28 pm, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I really like today's post, I think it is probably my favourite so far, it makes me want to read the rest of it so that I can find out why he's in a restricted area and why there's smears of blood. Keep it going, so far it sounds fantastic!!!

Jo

 

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