The Guardian

Day Thirteen - Extract from Chapter Thirteen

Another tough day struggling to get to the 1700 daily word target. But still, I made it!

The quality of writing keeps falling though and I have lost track of what is supposed to be happening completely! Ah well, it'll be a killer editing job / rewrite.

Excerpt:

"Those cogging Bruzteski’s speech noticed first – their connection severed as an obstetrician’s knife slices the umbilical cord. Cries of alarm rippled through the crowds, first from those cogging, quickly followed by the rest who rushed to confirm their claims and were met by an empty, foreboding silence."

posted by Des @ 9:57 pm